Sartarite Blue

Earth Season, Death Week, Clay Day; a Holy Day of Humakt

Dramatis Personae

PC

Dormal
Mellia
Xenofos

NPC

Eranda Humakti
Solaska the Apothecary
Kirse Saiciae
Many people from House Thisera
Some guards from various houses
Trolls, offstage
Venlar, in the form of Orlanth
Venlar, in the arms of Mellia
Some palanquin bearers who got paid twice
Some guards who did not get paid
Grandmother Saiciae

Events

As before, the log will be recounted with extracts from the private poetry collection of Dr Tomm.

My love is a wellspring of love
Each smile that blossoms is strength to me.
Life, and the source of life.
Love, and the reason to love.
I hold her in turn, patient and strong,
A storm that hovers by her at her will.

Venlar, II-23, Trans Garin

['As you will no doubt be aware - and if you are not you may ask Dr Tomm about extra reading - the translation of this work is a difficult one. This translation - by me, as yet undated because unpublished - keeps the underlying conceit; a poem based on the name of Venlar's lover. However, I have never yet risen to the challenge of translating it from the syllabic Theyalan to a modern syllabic poem. Mellia's name is usually consistent throughout the work of Venlar, spelled in what I would think of as a Sartarite style, but there is also an Esrolian pronunciation that emphasises the feminine ending, which the Venlar poet uses from time to time. I have side-stepped all of that by spelling her name as we read and write it.']

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